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Ciel's new sister

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Colton was enjoying a nice walk as he was heading back home. "Wonder how Ciel's doing? I haven't seen here for a while" He doesn't know his friend, Ciel was watching him. Ciel was a Phoenix and good friends with Colton. She was holding a gooey substance in her wing. "Hehe I hope Colton enjoys this nice gift from me" She then threw the goo near Colton's path. Colton doesn't see it as he steps right on it. The goo then begins to grow around his body. He starts to notice as he looks down. He was surprise. "W-what is this stuff?" He starts to ask. His legs then begins to change into bird like legs as his toes change into his new tallons. The goo then changes itself into his new black feathers as it works it's way to his arms. His arms then quickly changes into his new wings as it works its way up to his head. "Unngh I can't move" His mouth and nose then change into his new beak as his head was now finish as his gender change to female. When it was over. Colton had become a female Phoenix. She was surprise by this. "I-I'm a phoenix like Ciel. But how?" she starts to ask as her voice was much higher. "That would be my doing Colton" Ciel then appears before her. "Ciel?. You did this?" Ciel just smile. "Yes I hope you don't mind" said Ciel. "But why?" said Colton. "We've been friends for a long time. So I thought it would be cool to have another Phoenix to hang out with. So I use my own DNA and change you into a female Phoenix" said Ciel. "Your own DNA? But that means-" Ciel then inturupts her. "Yes you are now my sister. We share the similar DNA. Do you like it Colton?" Colton just smile. "Like it? I love it" She then goes over to Ciel and starts to hug her. "Thank you sis" Ciel then hugs her new sister back. "Your welcome sis. Since your female now. What should we call you?" Ciel ask. "How about Coltrena" said Coltrena. "Sounds good to me. I know a good hot spring we can go too. Want to join me?" She ask her new sis. "Sure" Ciel and Coltrena then fly's off together as Coltrena starts her new life as a Phoenix and being with her new sister
A story for phoenixwulf.deviantart.com/ as a thank you present for doing so many commissions for me. I hope you enjoy the story
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ohh... this remind me of hot spring picture comission i did for you~